How To Make Your Fiction More Interesting

It was 1 p.m. in the afternoon and I was watching the cursor on my word doc. blink, blink, blink.

I’d spent the last three hours writing … actually, that’s being a bit generous …

In truth, I probably wrote for 1.5 hours. The rest of the time was made up with quickly checking/replying to emails, hanging out laundry, patting the dog, making lunch, refilling my water bottle, and staring out the window. 

Yup, you guessed it. I am working on a first draft.

It’s been three weeks since Every Time He Dies was officially released and as you well know it took me seven years to write that novel. 

The last few years of working on Every Time He Dies was so joyful because I was confident with the story and the characters.

Here’s the thing, because that project started so long ago, I’d totally forgotten what it’s like to begin a new project!

The new novel (which I started in January this year) is about three female protagonists who have animal companions. The book has elements of sci-fi, cli-fi, horror, magical realism and literary fiction.

When compared to ETHD, It could not be more different … at least in premise.

Don’t worry, it’s still written by me so it reeks of mysticism, time manipulation, and otherworldliness.

But … can I just say how weird it is to be working on a project I am so unfamiliar with?

Right now, I am ten months into the drafting process and I’m still drifting. 

I wrote a 60,000 word draft at the start of this year, but it’s really just a brain dump of ideas. Now I am HEAVILY revising that document to the point where it feels like a totally new story. In fact, to say that I am revising my brain dump draft feels a bit disingenuous considering how much I am changing the story. 

I hope you’re getting a sense here of how messy writing is because it is messy. 

At the start of this project, I produced an outline, completed profiles of all my characters and typed one that initial brain dump version of the story. All of this succeeded in getting the ball rolling, but these processes only lead me so far.

Writing is a physical act. You can’t always think your way through it. Sometimes, you don’t know if something is going to work until you sit down to write it. 

As a result, there comes a point where you have to put one foot in front of another (or one letter after another) and that is how you make your way through the dark. Slowly. Very slowly.

If you follow me on Instagram, you’re probably thinking, “Don’t you write 2000 words a day?”

Yeah, for the most part, I do. 

Q: How the heck do you do that?

A: I follow Natalie Goldberg’s rules for writing and rule number one is: keep your hand moving. 

A: Okay … but what does that actually mean?

Q: Basically, during the drafting phase, I try not to think too much about what I am writing, instead, I let the story lead the way. 

And yet, there is some cognitive action going on behind the scenes.

Lately, my writing mantra has been make it weirder. 

It’s amazing how effective those three words have been.

I can be working on a scene and thinking, “God, this is boring! I’m just moving the characters around! I’m just describing their day!” 

Then I pause and think, “Okay. So this scene stinks. Big deal! What can we do to fix this? How can I make it more interesting? How can I make it weirder?

I then skip ahead to the next page and let loose. 

This approach has resulted in some damn fine writing, and you know … some pretty weird stuff too.

If you’re currently in the throes of writing a first draft, or if you are revising a manuscript and thinking things such as, “this is boring”, I invite you to try my mantra or to come up with your own. 

You may be surprised by just how effective this simply mind game can be. 

 

The One Writing Hack That Can Change Everything

We’ve all heard the writing advice to read as much and as widely as possible.

The reason for this advice is fairly simple. If you are a fantasy writer and you only read fantasy novels, you run the risk of producing a novel that lacks originality.

You may be very well informed about what stories, premises and concepts have already been done, but how will you be able to offer anything different if your reading preferences are so narrow?

Writers should aim to read as widely as possible. You may love fantasy novels, but it’s important that you also read outside of this genre.

Read crime, romance, science fiction, speculative and horror books. Read literary books, classics, short stories, flash fiction, micro fiction and non-fiction.

Read cookbooks, memoirs, essay collections and poetry. Read books about travel, history, theory, politics, productivity, money and health.

Read books about how to declutter and organise your house.

Read medical books.

Read coffee table books like Bibliophile by Jane Mount (one of my current favs and a fantastic starting point for reading widely!).

Not only will reading widely make you a better person in general (hello, healthy eating habits, responsible saving and organised wardrobes!), it will make you a more interesting person to talk to and it will definitely make you a better writer.

When you know more, it’s possible to write more because you’re no longer drawing from your limited experiences or ideas. Challenge yourself to read works that open your eyes to bigger concepts and problems.

Read books about feminist theory, climate change, philosophy, human/animal relations, economics and conspiracy theories (this one is especially great for dystopian writers!).

Reading widely enable you to take snippets of information from a variety of sources and embed that knowledge within your current WIP.

The work will benefit from your careful inclusion of this information as the story itself will become more interesting. Obviously.

Also, if you read more widely and challenge yourself to read texts you wouldn’t ordinarily read (especially non-fiction and scholarly works including literary analysis, theory, philosophy), you will innately produce work that has more substance. Your work will have something to say.

Remember: the message behind the story needn’t be prescriptive or a slap in the face; there is such a thing as sub-text.

Remember: Your readers aren’t stupid. If you do a good job, they’ll find the message beneath the mayhem. 

Even if a reader picks up your work and enjoys it solely for the story, they will still feel that the book is about something bigger.

You don’t have to read widely. You don’t have to write stories that are more than just the story. But the writing process itself and your growth as a human being will be better if you do. Just saying.

If you’re not sure where to start, I’ve included a list of random books you may enjoy perusing.


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Books that Will Make You a Better Writer

Romance

Tipping the Velvet – Sarah Walters
Atonement – Ian McEwan
Cold Mountain – Charles Frazier

Fantasy

Nevernight – Jay Kristoff
The Savior’s Champion – Jenna Morecci
Rupetta – Nike Sulway (?)

Crime

Call my Evie – J.P. Pomare
Mystic River – Dennis Lehane
The Big Sleep – Raymond Chandler

Dysfunctional Families

Flowers in the Attic – V.C. Andrews
Everything I Never Told You – Celeste Ng
The Liar’s Club – Mary Karr

Cli-fi

Clade – James Bradley
Stations Eleven – Emily St John Mandel
Gold Fame Citrus – Clair Vaye Watkins

Speculative

A Superior Spectre – Angela Myer
The Book of Dream – Nina George
Lincoln in the Bardo – George Sauders

Dystopia

A Clockwork Orange – Anthony Burgess
Never Let Me Go – Kazuo Ishiguro
The Stand – Stephen King

Literary

The Poisonwood Bible – Barbara Kingsolver
Commonwealth – Ann Patchett
We are all Completely Beside Ourselves – Karen Joy Fowler

Historical Fiction

From the Wreck – Jane Rawson
The Signature of Everything – Elizabeth Gilbert
Bitter Greens – Kate Forsyth

Classics

Villette – Charlotte Brontë
Emma – Jane Austen
Orlando – Virginia Woolf

Essay Collections

What are People For? – Wendell Berry
A Field Guide to Getting Lost – Rebecca Solnit
I was Told There’d be Cake – Sloane Crosley

Short Stories

Her Body and Other Parties – Carmen Maria Machado
The Bloody Chamber – Angela Carter
This is How You Lose Her – Junot Diaz

Non-fiction Environmental Writing

The Reinvention of Eden – Carolyn Merchant
The Soul of an Octopus – Sy Montgomery
The Invention of Nature – Andrea Wulf
The End of Nature – Bill McKibben

Get your life together

You are a Badass at Making Money – Jen Sincero
Do the Work – Steven Pressfield
The Happiness Project – Gretchen Rubin
Deep Work – Cal Newport

Poetry

Ariel – Sylvia Plath
Life on Mars – Tracy K. Smith
Howl – Allen Ginsburg